The fog was lifting, rising off the glossy pristine surface of the motionless lake. She and her father went arm in arm entering the room with beautiful high ceilings and colorful flower arrangements. I brushed my teeth.
The unbearable pain I was experiencing and the urge to push grew stronger!
Add details to tell the reader what you see, hear, smell. If I had the power to transform the educational system to more effectively develop critical thinking abilities, I would start to familiarize children with the concepts Supported only by stilts, its shabby character inconsistent to the grace and elegance of its neighbours.
When going to, or home from, school, she always walks behind the clique of girls she tries to follow, even though she cannot follow